I have changed my mind about the story plot again, but this time I'm sticking to it. I have decided that this will be the plot;
There is a man and a woman. They are in a relationship. He is going to propose to her, but she is thinking of leaving him. It is a simple plot but alot happens during this opening. It ends on a cliff hanger when he asks "Will you marry me?" and there is just a close up of her face. That will be the end of the film opening.
I will post more about this when I have had a discussion with my focus group on what we can do to make this better.
